Dave999 | # 5821 | 2016-05-11, 18:42 | Report

and how do you treat others in the thread?

pichlo | # 5822 | 2016-05-11, 18:44 | Report

As they deserve.

gerbick | # 5823 | 2016-05-11, 18:45 | Report

Dave999 | # 5824 | 2016-05-11, 18:50 | Report

as YOU THINK they deserve, you mean.

Alright, then we have different views. You might be a bit more consecrative then

I can respect that. After all, you're British, right?!?

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tommo | # 5825 | 2016-05-11, 18:50 | Report

Gerbick is the child's grumpy neighbour, but he's got a heart of gold and saves the child from a group of zombie monkeys.

gerbick | # 5826 | 2016-05-11, 18:56 | Report

Zombie monkeys... I am so stealing that as a concept.

tommo | # 5827 | 2016-05-11, 19:04 | Report

I just thought your story needed a bit of 'hollywood'

Dave999 | # 5828 | 2016-05-11, 20:08 | Report

Yeah. You space up the life of an otherwise pretty boring story.

Great work today guys. Excellent storytelling everyone

I haven't found anyone with refund this week. Hope atleast some refunds will appear next week.

mscion | # 5829 | 2016-05-11, 20:24 | Report

I really like the idea of a storyline but it all seems too sketchy as written. Need more details. Like what really happened between "Child invests in new toy" and "New toy doesn't arrive". Also could be interesting plot development for what happened between "New toy doesn't arrive" and "Child has tantrum". Perhaps add a shocking ironic twist after "Child feigns ignorance" like it turns out that the Child is actually Elop!

Dave999 | # 5830 | 2016-05-11, 20:52 | Report

Aha Gerbick, I just realized that you need to step up your game. I'm only a few post behind you now...first to 10.000 wins.

Or a tie if full refund appears before that.